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Winter (RussiaxReader)

A Hetalia Fanfiction
Winter
RussiaxReader

Russia smiled, closing his eyes to shut out the winter cold from stinging them, and listened contentedly to the crunching and rustling of the ice and soft snow of the mountains under his feet as he shuffled through the thick layer of white fluff in his boots, dragging one leg through the stubborn mass of what seemed almost to be firm stone, and then lifting the other and advancing up the path; it was difficult to walk through snow, as much as one who had not lived in Russia might imagine otherwise; it seemed to him that foreigners always thought in that manner. He was dressed in a thick, gray coat th

Winter (RussiaxReader)

by *GermanyXItaly1000

Critique by ~Russias-Maid Nov 15, 2012, 11:29:37 PM

This story is a great story for many reasons. Number 1: It draws you in as you imagine the scenery and his daily life. Number 2: It is very detailed so it is easier to picture and just feel like you are there. Number 3: This is so him! You captured Ivan, or Russia, perfectly! He is just like this! And he never gives up in this type of situation.
If you were to make more of these chapters, I would end up suggesting that you should make a book out of this! It is very entertaining! Keep up the fantastic work!

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*GermanyXItaly1000 Nov 15, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

My... thank you, love, I do notice the username. It's... wonderful. :3

I'd like to thank you for the lovely review, which I do appreciate very much, and I think that it will be very helpful in what I should keep up with in the future. I'll certainly make another story based on this, since I am going to be giving out more chapters, and I do hope you enjoy the rest of the story to come.

Thank you for the critique, again!

~Russias-Maid Nov 15, 2012 Hobbyist Filmographer

That's alright! No problem! I love writing critiques but they are just so long. (For me anyway) But I am happy you like my critique.

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