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This story is a great story for many reasons. Number 1: It draws you in as you imagine the scenery and his daily life. Number 2: It is very detailed so it is easier to picture and just feel like you are there. Number 3: This is so him! You captured Ivan, or Russia, perfectly! He is just like this! And he never gives up in this type of situation.
If you were to make more of these chapters, I would end up suggesting that you should make a book out of this! It is very entertaining! Keep up the fantastic work!
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Espada-Kitsuki Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
My... thank you, love, I do notice the username. It's... wonderful. :3

I'd like to thank you for the lovely review, which I do appreciate very much, and I think that it will be very helpful in what I should keep up with in the future. I'll certainly make another story based on this, since I am going to be giving out more chapters, and I do hope you enjoy the rest of the story to come.

Thank you for the critique, again!
Russias-Maid Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
That's alright! No problem! I love writing critiques but they are just so long. (For me anyway) But I am happy you like my critique. :D
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